January 4, 2003
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discovery of the whole
and when i found him
he transformed me
took my flat plane
and molded,
sculpted,
until i had two dimensions,
three.
he worked to build me -
at times carefully,
at time unconsciously,
and when there were spaces
found in this once-tired shape,
he filled them,
taking of himself.
no longer flat,
no longer colored grey;
i am full!
rounded by the hand of him.
tinted with shades,
once unknown to me,
a perfect sphere.
and when i found him
he transformed me.
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thank you God… Love, Shy
Comments (13)
By the time I got to the end of the first verse, I knew you were writing about God. Good poem, Shy. Happy 2003 to you!
happy new year shy!
that was beautiful…
Very ggod and very clear.
Ciao
MAN.. THATS A REAL.. NICE BEAUTIFUL POEM.. DAMN ….
hehe’ me to0!!! thankz for stopin by… i realli like the heart of the brazilian flag! nicee
beijo
Lekaa
WoW! What an inspiring poem. I love it! It feels so personal… I would like to give you more props if they were available!
Yea, I look forward to see your summer pictures. Would be a nice contrast to what I see here in the North. I totally need some defrosting now
hey you! off topic comment now…
sei que você gosta de música por causa dos seus contantes posts com lyrics n stuff, vc já ouviu o novo cd da Aimee Mann – Lost in Space? Muito bom, muito acima da média do que há por aí. Você ouviu a trilha do filme Magnólia? É a mesma cantora. Muito bom.
Beijos
Beautiful poem of confidence in God .
Michel
I like also your profil picture ; a beating heart , green like Hope , yellow like warmth and blue like quietness . What is the meaning of the white stripe ?
Love
Beautifully put…and so moving.
isnt it amazing to percieve how beautifully and well made we are? all by HIS hands….
Bless you!
Love
…beautiful!!! Love and energy,
MuSe