June 5, 2003

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    Tell me a story


    Tell me a story, Poet,
    Tell me one filled with the champagne cascades of laughter,
    With the hue and cry of bloody war,
    With the spilling salt of tragic tears,
    Everything.

    Tell me a story, please.
    I’ll sit on your knee,
    Please enchant me,
    Fill my head with visions of strangeness
    And nostalgia.
    Spin the words like such intricate thread
    That I can smell your delicate aromas
    And feel the heaving breath
    Of chase, pursuit, romance, and pain.

    Please,
    Your voice soothes me
    With a dull roar of blazing hearths
    In the snowy winters,
    When I was wrapped in the scented furs
    And held the steaming mug
    In my stubby hands.

    If only
    These words could paint around me
    A world other than this
    That is thicker more than the paint used
    To create it.
    Your lovers’ roses would grace my tables,
    The torn pennants of fallen armies
    Would fill the fields beyond the windows,
    And your tickle-tale laughter
    Would shake my ribs so hard
    That I could swear I would die.


Comments (4)

  • that is a beautiful poem lotus! it is a shame that we don’t have so many storytellers anymore…..there is something quite enchanting about listening to someone telling a story…it’s different from just reading them…..it’s a wonderful experience

  • Did some ask for a story-teller?

    Hehe… actually I’m currently writing a book and am planning on posting it chapter by chapter on my blog… I’ve writen a quick summary of the plot, but it’s not going to start till June 20th. (I need time to write most of it, and also to get a few more readers.

    I can’t promise tears and laughter, but I hopt it will entertain (How freaky you writing that poem on the day I decide to start posting my book…)

    Great poem BTW… you are describing my favourite kind of story.

    Arccrieslaughs…

  • Nice storry Lotus, keep luv coming. Lata.

  • It is raining, a happy rain.The rain drops are all telling stories ,millios of them.
    Just all the them are beautifull and today there are all happy stories, I don’t know why.
    Ciao

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