October 5, 2003
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Forever
Will you not dance by the shores beloved?
The sea’s melody is truly honey sweet.
Take me in your arms there beloved,
For tis heaven there I shall meet.
Will you not listen to the wind my love?
Over the sugar canes it blows.
A herald of the memories to come my love,
To unfolding petals of the rose.
Will you not hold me in the storm my heaven?
Let the rains kiss your face.
I see the beauty in your soul my heaven,
A beauty I shall forever embrace.
Will you not lay by my side my lover?
Tis your warmth beneath the stars I seek.
Caress my skin beneath your palm my lover,
Whilst twilight over the skies does creep.
For forever is still too short my darling,
Yet long enough to prove me true.
I will not cry a thousand oceans my darling,
For the kisses I lost to you.
this was written on the subway on my way home. as well as the sketch posted last Friday…now i wonder… what else should i do(make?) on my way home? HHmmm…ok, don´t answer….
Have a nice week, you all!
Comments (11)
Wowow!!! Thats beautiful… and you did it on the subway? Wow! Brazilian subways must surely be inspirational!
No matter how far… there must be some speciality about them… or wait I got it… the speciality is in the artist and not the inspiration… must be it
… or perhaps this has been on your mind for a bit. It is indeed beatiful :bighug: Meanwhile i think i need to ride the subway in sao paulo with you :star: i can the judge vineets hypotheses.
That is such a nice poem! I think it should be a song! Have you found him or still looking? All will happen in the right time, young one!
it is beautiful writing…..at least you make your commuting time into something productive!!!! i rarely do little more than stare out the window of the bus…
Hey you… how long do you take to commute form home to work? In São Paulo everything takes an ethernity even if you want to cross a simple street or go around the block… you and your huge magalópole.
Tem mesmo é que escrever/ ouvir música/ desenhar/ pintar/ surfar na inet/ enquanto se está no metro…
kisses
Pa
Those are nice lines!…
So…
Happy birthday! (belated)
And do you only dance on table with your birthday or can we hire you for our own parties ?
And yeah, I also listen to – amongst other – Nightwish…
I envy your talent! Hehe… I struggle to do my Math homework on the bus on the way home, let alone write fantastic poetry. BTW, how long is your subway journey?
Great poem, very romantic.
Arcwondersifyoucoulddohismathhomeworkonthesubway
j/k…
WOW! Your poem was beautiful, thanks for sharing with us :D
I can’t write ,read or draw during a bus or metro ride because i start turning green with queasiness.
Thanks for visiting my blog, although i hardly ever write nice stuff it feels good to have friends dropping by :)
As for showing you my paintings, i’d love to show them to you ,and i will as soon as i upload them hehe (i’m a procastinator :p )
See ya!