February 12, 2003

  • Current Listening to: His voice


    My memories
    like, empty reveries.
    My soul consumed
    by apparitions,
    have dissapeared
    over spacious time
    while my heart
    lies battered down.
    What hopes I had
    are left lying dead.
    My eyes withhold
    painful secrets.
    permanent scars have
    eaten away my faith…
    time alone is enough
    to break me.
    Sweet love,
    take shape of a dove.
    And with my heart
    sprout wings.
    Leave me alone
    and soar over painful heights
    and rescue me
    when you get the chance.

    ~Shy~

Comments (16)

  • Lovely poem as usual, Shy… absolutely lovely… though, I do think you should post some bright and happy… just the way you are when online

  • I’ll be a bat…

    I see most things correctly upside down :D

  • Beautiful poem! Happy Valentine’s Day

  •  sweet  and bitter beautiful poem , Shy . I send to you very sincerely my best wishes for the Valentine Day .

    Love        Michel

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  • Happy Valentine’s Day, Shy!

  • Beautiful heart felt words.. with such sadness at the core.  Hugs.. Rose

  • hey nice poem, but i am wondering about the phograph….it reminds me of kerla in india…which place is this??

  • hey happy val day to u too……amazing lines!! thanks.

  • Nice idea of taking the shape of a dove.
    Nice day to you too Shy, have a great weekend.
    Carlo

  • …such a sad, beautiful poem. A testiment to Eros (Cupid) the arrow of love is both sweet and painful.
    ppjournal posted this quotation:
    “Things don’t go wrong and break your heart so you can become bitter and give up. They happen to break you down and build you up so you can be all that you were intended to be.” — Charles “Tremendous” Jones
    hugs, MuSe

  • PS…correction: pprjournal. M

  • Beautiful lines…(but silently I wish that this roller coater ride comes to a pause)

    God Bless…happy valentine’s day

  • That was beautiful. Hope you have a great day..

  • There’s a beauty in melancholy which I think you possess, but I hope it does not possess you.

  • Hi, you don’t know me, I just happened upon your sight. I just wanted to let you know that I really like that poem.  You are extremely talented and gifted.  Have a good day :)

     

  • ~Clapping hands loudly~…WONDERFUL!

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