March 12, 2003



  • Today was red,
    Awash in rose crimson that bled like petals
    Across the floor.

    Someone’s words rang true
    In the drifting light that flared and died,
    Flared and died,
    Blazing through me and then drawing back
    To leave a smouldering center
    Of purified strain.
    The sweat stood upon my skin,
    And my face was drenched in freezing rain
    As the petals wafted down,
    So thick that I could barely see.
    Crimson, every one.

    Perhaps the sky was bleeding,
    Perhaps that is where the world holds dear its heart,
    And it was pierced and spurned.
    So it bled in petals
    That were swirled about in the currents of wind
    That gusted through their descending clouds of crimson.
    I ran through this place of mourning
    And blundered in a world of sunlight and red,
    For the sunset sifted through in bolts of pure rusted gold
    That made my breath leap and lift
    As I floundered in the deepening drifts
    Of crimson.

    Somehow, there was no one else
    In this confused place of twilight and beauty,
    The cities had disappeared,
    And there was nothing but myself,
    The soil,
    The petals,
    And the muffled sea.
    But then your hand brushed my cheek
    As you faded by through the storm of blood-color,
    And I cried out and ran after your apparition.
    In this land of crimson,
    How could I have seen the edge of the cliff
    As I stepped off
    And fell silently into the muffled sea?

Comments (13)

  • that was so beautiful…. very lovely….

  • That was so so good… though, a very much normal blog from you

    Alas… it did have that sad touch to it… slight, but sad…

    Keep the inspiration and give us more…

  •  :( THat was exquisite, but so sad. And I would love to visit Brazil some day, I have heard it’s a paradise.. sun! sun! sun!

  • yes, sad and nice…

  • that was a really fantastic poem, lotus! i could actually visualize it!

  • …beautiful! MuSe

  • That was a good poem of beauty yet with a sadness touch.

    Take care.

  •  i always thought the sea was an amplifier.

  • Acredita que eu via esse cd [Buddha Lounge] hoje numa loja? Fui comprar um cd de música indiana pra minha mãe e lá tava ele, o rapaz da loja falou que era meio eletrônico e tal… acabei levando outro… coincidência??

    :)

    sobre a viagem, peguei um navio em santos, foi pro Rio, Salvador, Ilhéus e Búzios. Muuuito bom, valeu muito a pena, e me fez var mais ainda que preciso mudar meu estilo de vida pra melhro urgente, senão vou ter uma estafa com 26 anos, hehe

    beijos

    PS: beautiful red poem :P

  • What a vivid imagery… of the bursted heart… of the crimson petals…. you have painted a beautiful but poignant picture with your words. Great work! 

  • :)   obrigado, por os seus props e comentarios. ….. as vezes cuando tenho tempo the ler o seu weblogs me divirto me muito a ler-los.  ….Tens boa mao para escrever poesia.  Nunca pare essa mente de trabalhar. …. Beijinhos.  <3 ana <3

  • Lotus, that was very nice to read. Thank You.

  • You have such an imagination   That was so visual.

    You left a comment on my site (I am not really checking my site any more right now, just reading other people’s but I’m going to go back to it) about Indian eyes in Brazil.  Amazonian Indians. 

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