March 14, 2003
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sitting here, watching you fall
i can’t see, anything at all,
but you.
i get up, and walk to the door
thinking of you is such a bore
but sometimes, i can’t see
all of the joy that you bring me
sitting here, watching you fall
i can’t see, anything at all,
but you.
writing a note, to say good-bye
all i want to do is die
without you, my life is null
i just don’t think, i have the pull
sitting here, watching you fall
i can’t see, anything at all,
but me.
Comments (11)
Wow… lovely, touching words… keep the inspiration and keep writing… love your blogs… always a new journey reading them…
Take care
wow… I like that!
…when emotions crowd the skull.
BEAUTIFUL POETRY…I THINK BAZILIAN WOMEN ARE VERY BEAUTIFUL TOO
The joy you feel in writing is so apparent. It’s been so long since I just enjoyed the simple pleasure of writing just because. Beautiful words.
:SOB: :SNIFF: :SNIFF: That is just so touching…. :SNIFF:
The pain inspires beautiful poem such this one you have written , Shy .
Love Michel
Well as everyone said…I agree its beautiful…But makes me think wht was goin thru’ ur mind when u were writing that
that was awesome, thanks for sharing that
Beautiful, I love it when you write.