March 26, 2003
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WAS
Today was the last time that the rain song
Floated on the hills of sorrow
As they waved their grass-flecked whale-back ways
All the way to rock-sand shores
Where foam-specked tides swam for days
And dropped off the edge of the cliffs,
Pouring out ivory froth into
Deep ebony space.
Yesterday was the last time that my hand
Played the violin from the dizzied dismal heights
Far above the brown-dirt land
Where the devils believe in something other than tango.
The melodies seemed to span
The distance between the dancing fingers
And the still, blind eyes
That spoke of dust and sand.
Today was the last time,
And it makes them sad that my mouth is open,
As if I am about to speak,
Yet my eyes have fallen still.
Close them,
The waves flow out to the edge of the sea
And the clocks begin to slow.
Today was the last time
I held it in my hand
And now the crows have nestled in my hair
And borne my soul away.

Comments (13)
Wow… what an imagery… truly beautiful… words beyond words… keep ‘em coming Shy…
that was awesome…wow….
When are you going to publish your beautiful work?
…beautiful words.
MuSe
Wonderful words…and thank you for the “good day wishes”…and I wish the same for you
That was really pretty! I wish I could write poems like that
Hey,
conferi o cd (pelo menos as faixas disponíveis de exemplo na amazon). Bem bom mesmo.
Mas como tudo na vida tb pra música tenho meus períodos… não são fases, porque na verdade não passam, vêm e vão.
hoje estou bem mais agitado e a música que eu ouço tb, certamente logo volto ao meu zen, depois ao meu jazz, depois ao meu folk, depois ao meu rock e assim vou.
Bjs
You can’t imagine what you wrote. So…you have felt it. Many will never feel it until it’s time. And for too many of those, too short an instance to be appreciated suchly.
Friday will feel like my last day too
Great poem, great way to put in words feelings of feeling powerless while time is passing by you.
that was reallly beautiful
Exquisite.. as usual.
Lovely imagery. You have a vivid imagination and a way with words
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